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thank you soooo much, I have been writing a novel for some time now and it has a love seen in it.
The seen just wasn't working for me, and I didn't know what was wrong with it (until I read this that is).
You mustn’t make of them naked playthings with rubbery parts.
Yes, I was having an affair with a married man, no it wasn't my husband either. Yet, like many people in life, character can surprise you when the lights are off behind closed doors. *wink* I resent the remark that woman don't orgasm easily. Also, not to say that "You're on my hair" or "Sorry for the knee in the rib cage" doesn't get said but being vocal is arousing. ), "clamber" on/in/out of things 21 times, and "smirk" 34 times.
I hate to disillusion you, however, when my lover and I were busy at it.
I would tell him to go deeper, harder, faster, slower and fuck me. Thanks to my ever-useful Kindle search function, I have discovered that Ana says "Jeez" 81 times and "oh my" 72 times.
He would also tell me to suck, squeeze, Neither of us thought of chores, our wives, and husbands, yep we had those and other daily realism. I also multi orgasm, due to excessively sensitive nerve endings. I find your hypothesis completely wrong, or your sex life was mundane. She "blushes" or "flushes" 125 times, including 13 that are "scarlet," 6 that are "crimson," and one that is "stars and stripes red." (I can't even imagine.) Ana "peeks up" at Christian 13 times, and there are 9 references to Christian's "hooded eyes," 7 to his "long index finger," and 25 to how "hot" he is (including four recurrences of the epic declarative sentence "He's so freaking hot.").
From my personal experience, I did tell my lover to go deeper or fuck me harder. Yet, like many people in life, character can surprise you when the lights are off behind closed doors. Christian's "mouth presses into a hard line" 10 times.
After reading that and getting some pointers I switched things around...it's still not 'great' in the least but it is getting there.